Hi Srivart, You should include every constructive thing you do as an extra curricular, so the colleges get a sense of who you are. And you should also separate these two statements into independent sentences here, separated by a period, and you should capitalize the I in the second sentence, and end the second sentence with a question mark. Any time you communicate professionally, pay attention to details and show respect, because you are creating your professional reputation, which is important. All the best, Susanna

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